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Critiques
I love your rendition of WW, first thing I thought when I saw this was Hughes, so mission accomplished.
My main issue here is with two things. Lineart is on point * I LOVE it* so no crit there, it's a very short crit actually.
1: The rendering of her skin: it isn't sharp enough. Hughes colors with a mouse so the places he defines are TOTALLY sharp, especially around the cleavage and clavicle areas. Right here it looks like you're not sure of the anatomy or where the muscles go, which shows a lot.
Secondly the colors you chose are very.. muddy. They won't print well or display well on the screen, plus the harmony here doesn't exist. I know you tried to make her part of the bg with the underlighting and accents you put in, but WHERE you put them in and what colors you selected doesn't flatter her at all. The shadows seem like you've used a brush on multiply mode to create them; they're awkwardly developed and placed *I had this same problem some time ago so I understand*.
In all, great work, just a bit of color tweaks and some more refining on both metal and the skin will make this one killer piece. Great work.
Before I disappear, I've done a paintover for you that explains a bit of what I mean >> [link]
Hope it helps!
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